Grammar and you (also prologues)

I have been reading back the previous chapters and reediting some grammatical mistakes here and there that I didn’t catch while hopped up on coffee at 2:00 AM (not my brightest idea)

I’m not the greatest with catching my own mistakes and I’m flying solo on this project so if you DO catch something feel free to email me at or comment with the mistake so I can rectify it and not look like a total fool.

In other news you may have noticed I’ve added a new prologue here. It takes place a few days before the events in chapter one and I was unsure if I was going to include this scene for a while as it’s pretty revealing of what happens in the next few chapters, but I opted for it because I really enjoy the way it’s written and it also sets the tone pretty well for the rest of the novel.

Anyways I hope you enjoy the prologue, and if you’re new this is a great way to start reading what I’ve written so far. It was a long time between when I picked this story back up and when I last contributed to it so my writing ability has grown a lot, and some of the older chapters have some issues I’m not 100% happy with. This is for me at least a first draft that I happen to be putting out to the world and I’m pretty happy to be doing so, so the little stuff at the very least is not set in stone.

Thanks to anyone and everyone who cares,


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